Surprise me with custard apples in April
and snowflakes in Bombay's November.
Find me a flawless orange maple leaf
and ink my back with a black sea horse.
Sing to me with made-up words
and recite about love in a foreign tongue.
Cajole me into wearing fuschia silk
and tie up my hair in an unkempt braid.
Touch me without touching me
I wish to bathe in your warmth.
Spoil me for I can be spoiled
by nothing and everything.
Hold me on the brink of life
and breathe harder when I miss my breath.
Take me back to that little girl
who believed in flying with gossamer wings.
wow. one of my favorite pieces by you. <3 it Karishhhhhhhhhh!
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ReplyDeleteLike a magical love song threaded with the dreams of a child!
ReplyDelete@Rajni - :) :)
ReplyDelete@Gemma - That summed it all up! Thanks for visiting :)
Wow lovely....nice write.....
ReplyDelete@ Sreeja: Thank you! :)
ReplyDeleteThis is a very beautiful poem. The idea of being able to touch someone without touching is a paradox not easily fulfilled, but your opening stanzas give a few lovely suggestions how this may be achieved.
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@Kerry: Aah well! Thanks for your note :)
ReplyDeleteI was going through yours and loved your piece as well. You write beautifully. Oh, and Real Toads is a great place. I hope to come a visiting more often :)
an eternal fantasy that takes us to our own lands of 'if only'.lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteand could you please turn off the word checker?
Ah! between you and Kerry, I am sighing with love memories today. What your narrator wants--surprise, sing, touch, hold and more in between--is active and is possible. I was there once, and can return there in my heart when I read poems like yours.
ReplyDeleteI do love this, beautiful verses that fill me with my own (similar) longings
ReplyDeleteso beautiful...I adore this line "Hold me on the brink of life
ReplyDeleteand breathe harder when I miss my breath."
@Abin: Big fan of the 'if only!' Join the club :P
ReplyDeleteDidn't quite get the word checker bit. What did you mean by that?
@Susan: Comparing mine to Kerry's work in itself is a big honour. She writes beautifully :) I'm glad to know that you felt this way...
Thank you so much for visiting.
@Turtlememoir: My pleasure. I continue to yearn for such experiences. It's amazing how unadulterated notions of love from our younger days can continue to have such a strong effect.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your comment :)
@Laura: Thank you! :))